Monday, September 29, 2008

Waste Land in class (the most important poem of the 20th century)

Complete structure (all five parts as a whole)
It's greatness lies in it's ability to connect with us all, as in Prufrock and Eliot's other early poetry.

Traveling through a series of images (sorta like Dante?) Go home and listen to Eliot read it and check out the power point.
----The tarot prediction in the first section is explicated throughout the rest of the poem; the next four parts explain/live out the prediction in the Burial of the Dead.

Luke Skywalker is the Hanged Man! In Episode 2 when he loses his hand and falls off the antenna upside down. Upside-down means it will be resurrected and reversed.




This is the most helpful hypertext I could find:
http://world.std.com/~raparker/exploring/thewasteland/table/explore5.html

Burial of the dead
What's wrong with the world, how the earth is now a waste land
Begins the same as Chaucer--in April, so he's well-read/well-versed in literature


Game of Chess
Failures of married love/life the game isn't being played right; the strategies are wrong; how to make life worth living again through love and marriage

Fire Sermon
Failure of lust (unstructured love); awkward love/sex relationships; sexuality and desire (stirred by spring rain?); practicing 'free love' in a philosophical way, of course;


Death by water
low point; sparagmos;


Thunder said
Eliot's last attempt to make sense of the world before converting to Christianity; water cures the waste land since it's dry and rocky;

Blog the themes I identified in parts of Burial, sections 2, 3 and 5 (I'm a 5!)









"Full Fathom Five..."

(From "The Tempest")
Full fathom five thy father lies;
Of his bones are coral made;
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that does fade,
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange.
Sea-nymphs hourly ring his knell:
Ding-dong,
Hark! Now I hear them – Ding-dong, bell.


Waste Land

This was a difficult piece. I read all the interpretations I could find and I agree that it is difficult to wake up after sleeping for a long time. "Warm, covering in forgetful snow" is an excellent description of the sleepy, waking dream of depression. I've spent medicated years covered in forgetful snow, subsisting on dried tubers, and Summer definitely surprised me when I decided to stop taking all those meds. I argued with my doctors and eventually did it on my own as memory and desire stirred the dull roots of the life I was no longer living so much as stumbling through. I think I need more than a week to adequately discover what lies between the lines of this song for me; a year ago or so, I would have sailed through this and known it all but I've come a long way with lots of therapy and trying to bury the snow under fresh new hyacinth flowers.

The Chess Game had a different meaning for me. I spent this summer in group therapy for a very old event that changed my life; it took me 15 years to come forward and ask for help. I admit I didn't "get it" but when I read the interpretations and learned that the Chess game is a cover-up and a description of a rape, I read it again with old eyes and came away with the nightingale who filled all the desert with inviolable voice: that's how the group sessions felt, actually, being able to give voice to such a terrible act and the struggle to find meaning in the senselessness of it, and that sometimes a death is merely symbolic and just to give life to something new. Yes, I understand the sacrifice of the old king for a bountiful harvest; I've always been enamored of ancient legends and myths, and tarot is nothing new but I studied I suppose a different pantheon with different symbols.

Friday, September 26, 2008

The waste land

At work, I was dutifully reading my Waste Land texts, all the explanations (because I needed them). I have always LOVED Prufrock but I guess I never bothered to pick up anything else by Eliot and was rather unprepared for the complexity of Waste Land. So one of my co-workers looked over my shoulder, the cook, and said "What's that? Waste Land? That's why I dropped out of high school! How're you doing with it?"
Well at least it's not just me that doesn't get it! I'm quite frustrated.

Monday, September 22, 2008

room

Ch 2--women in literature
1. general topic of chapter (s)
2. most important section, carries thematic weight, close reading
3. other thematic issues carried over from rest of book
4. compare/contrast with tse
5. problematic passages (don't understand or self contradicting)

went to the British Museum to research; BM is "where it's at" at the time for any research. everybody who's anybody went there to do their research.

Male/female dichotomies--contradicting ideas about women; we were the literary ideal yet in truth, flung about the room and owned by any male in the family be it father or husband

Money--allows for education and the opportunities to write
p38-freedom! I need not hate any man, he can take nothing from me; I need not flatter, he has nothing to give me.

subjective/objective--usually subjective, Virginia flips into objective and impersonal at times, like she flips truth/lies while fact-finding

Ch 3--
fictional story of Shakespeare's sister, Judith and history of women writers (made up the earlies story since there is no history of women that far back to Elizabethan women) and covers several known women-writers.
Why weren't there more woman writers? They couldn't own property because they were property; had no access to education or reading; Brontes (female authors, sisters) all published under pseudonyms (____ Bell)

p56 You shouldn't be able to tell what the writer is thinking, the writer's personality should not pervade through his/her work. The work should stand alone; grudges, spites and antipathies do not show through in Shakespeare's works and that makes him a good author.
the Great Artist is impersonal, objective

Ch 4--
the learning? lonely? world of the female writer; giving us (the readers) a coherent history of women writers, offering an alternate cannon!
p63 a contrast to Eliot who was not a fan of the romantics puts writers on a pedestal above ordinary people on the street
p64 a woman, the first who makes her living on writing, and the middle-class women who begin to write
Histories are written by men, who catalog wars, because Men think wars are important but Virginia Woolf writes about the beginning of women writing a lot as the significance worth noting over wars (Did women have a renaissance and what was it?)
Jane Austin--did not have a room of her own, was constantly disturbed by comings and goings in the public parlor of the home, yet nothing of her life shows through to harm her work, not distracted by pettiness, anger and fear.

Wednesday, September 17, 2008

8-Hamlet and others

I really only enjoyed the movie Hamlet because of Mel Gibson. I'd never found it interesting in high school, and now I know why: because Hamlet himself is made more important than the story, which I suppose is why the Mel Gibson version did so well. I must admit it's been quite a while since I've taken the Shakespeare class and don't remember whether or not the play was 'satisfactory' to me when we dealt with it in class. I believe Hamlet could have handled his situation better with a little more communication but don't understand quite how a playwright could have made a better story with less confusion. Since I did enjoy the movie, it wasn't a complete artistic failure, just needed a better setting to succeed than was available when this essay was written. Hamlet is generally portrayed as a buffoon, expressing the" buffoonery of an emotion which he cannot express in art" but how would one react to the death of one's father by his (or her) mother's treachery? I cannot relate to that emotion since I've never experienced such a betrayal; it is an amazing leap to delve into the psyche of the disturbed, especially one so intelligent as Hamlet.

As for the metaphysical poets, I enjoy the reading for the pleasant development of words as the subject progresses. I find the poems to be great works because they are lovely and justified, and do not as a rule try to pick apart pretty things just to discern their underlying meaning. Metaphors are not my strong point, I think, and admire the poets who excel in their use ( I watched too much tv as a child perhaps). "The poets of the 17th century, the successors of the dramatists of the 16th, possessed a mechanism of sensibility which could devour any kind of experience" I believe suggests what TIT states, that a great work of art is not created simply because the subject is great. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder and the poem just preceding the quote, beginning with "One walked between his wife and child;/with measured footfall firm and mild..." simply yet elegantly illuminates the simple beauty of a family, happy together. God made mountains and forests and oceans and humans, all of which are beautiful in themselves, but when human nature lends towards the chaotic, there is great beauty in the harmony we seldom create together and the words that describe this harmony, in my opinion, are greater because the subject is so much more obscure than the simplicity of describing the beauty of the lake or river, because it is less easily obtained.

adding clasmates blog urls

I went into edit my profile and it's under Links. Just add the url and it will appear at the bottom of the blog, after all my posts. There's a new gadget called 'Followers' to list people who follow my blog and I added it but I'm not sure yet how to add everyone's address. I only have two classmates blog addresses anyway so it doesn't do me much good, but I'll work on it when I get more. Perhaps we could all add ourselves to the followers to easily check each other's works?

Monday, September 15, 2008

7-Tradition and the Individual Talent

feelings=images, impressions; emotions=strings of feelings, events or experiences
the work, the poem itself as opposed to the poet
which is more beautiful: a poem about grand beauty, or the beauty in the everyday? (the progression of words and word-images, development of the subject)

As an aspiring writer myself, I of course model my works after what I've read before. When I read a fantastic story, I try to recreate it (my favorite inspiration is generally Borges; I like the way he makes the ordinary extraordinary). I like reading a fantastic story and finding out at the end it was simply something mundane that the author looked at through a different lens. Is what I write new and fantastic? No; it's traditional, modeled after a style I fancy at the moment, but it's new for me if it's a subject or style I've never come across before (some are good, some are pitiful attempts at greatness that fall far short) but even the stories that don't pass muster are part of the process, part of the cannon (in this case, my own personal canon) and each attempt changes forever the future forays into this style or that. Eliot is quite critical of writers, rather critics, who only look for what's new but how do you discern what is 'new' if you don't know what else is there?
I find that works that discuss the everyday and make it beautiful are my favorites. I read a poem once about a shiny metal goddess whose worshipers placed offerings in her belly and she gave them bread and cookies. The metal goddess was a Hobart mixer (like a Kitchen Aid mixer on your counter but the gigantic, industrial floor model). I'd never thought of working as a baker like that, and I've made my share of sheet cakes and loaves by the dozen in commercial kitchens, berating the choices that brought me into the heat of the kitchen, but jobs like that have a beauty of their own, too, if you know where to look. Not everybody goes to the Alps, so reading a poem about them may create images in my mind but only if very skillfully written. Most of us, even those who don't cook, at least know the machines that line the shelves at Target and Bed, Bath and Beyond and can picture the metal goddess in a new light next time you go shopping after reading that poem and find beauty in the every-day ordinary as it becomes extra-ordinary. How does a feeling become an emotion? Do you have to 'experience' the feeling often before it transforms itself or does it simply rise in intensity and recreate itself into the more solid designation of emotion? And who determines which it is? The poet, the poem or the reader? "Whoever has approved this idea of order, of the form of European, of English literature, will not find it preposterous that the past should be altered by the present as much as the present is directed by the past". So every time I've ever poured ingredients into a mixing bowl, I was placing my offerings into the goddess who exchanged my gift into a gift for me. How wonderful it is to bake and be part of the fantastic ritual of feeding my loved ones! I had no idea how the exchange was part of a plan; I just thought I wanted a cookie. So now my feelings about working as a baker have been changed by words, exchanged the feelings I had years before I experienced the poem, and feelings become emotions attached to the action of creating yummy things from plain old boring ingredients.